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 Post subject: Murder!? GASP! [IC]
PostPosted: Wed Feb 18, 2009 5:54 am 
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      "Oh, god..." Danny stumbled outside the Dining Room, her knees
      hitting solid wood flooring. She screamed out in shock, and held
      herself in a protective ball. "Oh ****, oh ****."

      The people back inside the room couldn't help but stare at the
      smashed body under a shattered work of hanging art. Glass
      and crystal covered the ground in that room, and gold pieces
      seemed to garnish the shards.

      Meaningless chatter filled the halls as people poured out;
      some with a similar reaction as hers; some not even giving
      a rat's ***.

      She just shook.
      This was too much to handle.

      ***

      Willard just stared. Any stroke of emotion did not grace his
      long, elegantly shaped face. With broad, precise steps, the
      butler grasped a telephone in his long wispy fingers. As soon as
      the operator uttered her first words, the Butler simply stated:

      "The police, please."

      Chatter.

      "Yes, indeed. There has been a murder at the Graffenhutch Mansion."

      Male chatter a few moments later.

      "Right away, sir." Pause. "Very good, sir."

      Her set the phone back on the receiver and made his way towards
      another maid and a few of the other housekeepers, and gave them
      simple instructions:

      To calm down those who had been.... affected by this little accident.

      Willard looked at the chandelier that had crushed his long-time
      employer.

      This piece had been tampered with.

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 Post subject: Re: Murder!? GASP! [IC]
PostPosted: Mon Mar 09, 2009 6:11 am 
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Carpenter stood in one of multiple large, illustrious bathrooms; both hands planted firmly on the sink while he stared at his reflection in a mirror mounted above the marble piece.
Cold water was running freely, and he had already splashed a handful over his face. He had been too absent to remember to turn it off.
It had come suddenly and violently to the woman. It wasn't a way that anyone would elect to go, least of all her.
Hell, she had held no intention of ever dying. She acted as if she was "above" the idea.
Funny, he had never gotten around to asking of her religion. Popular vote would be claimed roman-catholic or christian; but it was difficult to tell what she really believed.

He looked down to the sink, noticing that he had left it running. He quickly killed the stream and toweled down his face, before making his way back out into the hallway.
There was blood on his dinner jacket, it had spattered across him when the chandelier fell. Across his clothes, across his face...
He seemed to have lost himself for a moment when he had felt the warm red liquid hit his skin. The next moment of awareness, he seemed to have excused himself and was finishing cleaning the stuff off of himself in the bathroom. It was as if he had sleepwalked there.
He had mild haemophobia. It wasn't something that he came into contact with often, but he would break into a sweat and begin to feel nauseous whenever he saw the stuff; his reaction had been particularly bad this evening, to fit a particularly bad example. He had never lost time before.

She was the kind of woman that would always sit at the far end of the dinner table, like a queen watching over her many subjects. Although, his name had always been monogrammed into table napkin situated in front of the seat closest to her.
Monogrammed. She was the sort of woman that could both afford, and felt the need to order table napkins monogrammed with the names of any guest that she was having over.
One would think, "What an effort". Perhaps while bearing a smirk, but the statement would seem valid enough; but of course, it was never her who put in any sort of effort. It was always Willard.
In all probability, his monogrammed table napkin was also stained with her blood.

Had it really been an accident?
He shut his eyes and turned his head away, as if he was attempting to silently bear a terrible headache. In fact, he was attempting to banish the foul imagery that his shocked imagination was beginning to conjure.
He had no right to suspect anyone, none whatsoever. A chandelier had fallen, and until verified by the police; it was as simple as that, as far as he was concerned.

Danielle Ackers, the writer, was curled up in a ball outside the dining room.
She had met the woman with roughly the same degree of separation as he himself had; she was a daughter of a friend, he was a friend of a friend, who just happened to also be the old woman's architect.

"Oh ****, oh ****."

'Hey...' He spoke softly, pulling the bloody dinner jacket from his back and throwing it aside, crouching down next to the girl and placing a hand gently upon her back.
'Breath deep and slow; keep your eyes open; think of something to occupy your mind: book quotes, bible verses, things you like. Find something to concentrate on and hold it there.' He advised calmly, drawing on experience.

"49:5, Why should I fear when evil days come, when wicked deceivers surround me--"

The verse cut itself off before he did, shutting his eyes gently and clenching his jaw. He could not completely avoid the creeping suspicion that fell upon him. He was her architect; he had remembered each and every one of their agonizingly long sessions.
How could a woman so excruciatingly perceptive allow a piece of her abode to fall into disrepair? How did she not see it threatening to give way?


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PostPosted: Thu Mar 12, 2009 5:13 am 
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      "J-Jack?" She sniffed, looking up at him. How
      long had he been there? "Did you see it? O-oh
      my god, she's dead! What's mom going to say?"

      She brought her hands to her face. "I know I
      wanted a good story, but hell, this is-"
      It had been
      such a long time since she'd seen Jack; she forgot if
      he even knew that she only wrote from experience. The girl
      found herself in hysterical gasps and whimpers.

      Danny thought about her mother; how she was
      always saying, "You should meet her, dear, she's
      a fighter. You pick up a fork wrong and she'll take
      it from you and jab you with it! Vicious, I tell you!"

      The only time she'd ever get the chance to come here
      invited, without her mother, and the old lady gets
      smashed! God damn, what would her mother do?

      "Ladies and Gentlemen." The head butler was the last
      one to come out of that room and slipped something into
      his pocket. "I must implore you to carry on and go to your
      rooms. You may meet in the library; there is no shame in
      wanting to talk to others. This is an obscure position, after all,"

      Willard let that out with an exasperated sigh. "Just please do not
      go anywhere near Mrs. Depares's room, nor should you step
      foot in this area behind me. The police need these rooms untouched."


      The very mention of the police sent most of the guests into
      an uneasy silence.

      Danny held onto Jack's arm as if pleading for help up onto her
      feet.

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'To the library it is.' He muttered, frowning for a moment, before quickly resuming his concentration upon Danielle.
'Come on, time to go.' He said, softer; pulling his arm gently from her grip until his hand lay on her own, he closed his hand around it and stepped up, lifting the borderline-hysterical girl with him, whereupon he embraced her in a quick, reassuring hug.

He was far gentler than would be expected of an Architect, and he poised himself with an equally incongruous and strange grace. He seemed almost nineteenth-century in his mannerisms; with a handsome and well-dressed appearance befitting of nineteen-twenties upper-class; but with diction that was very much grounded in the twenty-first century.
He seemed to be a man lost in time.

He lead her as best he could to the library, placing a steady hand in the small of her back, protecting in the case of sudden syncope, and ready to keep her on her feet; however unsteady.
His hand fitted neatly below her shoulderblade, fitting with the curve of her spine, his fingers spread out for better support in the case of a sudden fall.
It was the position for ballroom.
His stride was unnaturally quick, gliding across the carpet instead of walking. He seemed to fly, yet the movement of his body indicated it not extraneous to him. It was not only his posture that seemed to be that of a dancer, his stride was equally finessed.

In a matter of minutes few he reached the doors to the library, passing through them and quickly finding an armchair, which he immediately lowered the girl into.
'I'll fetch water.' He said to her, finally releasing his hand from her own; it had not moved since he had lifted her from the floor.
He glided out of the room and returned in less time than it had taken him to bring her up the stairs, carrying with him a tall glass of water. He offered it to her, watching over her with an inquisitive eyebrow, like some sort of particularly protective uncle.


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      Tiny hands clasped the glass much like an infant exploring the
      world around it; the hands of a crafter. As much as that girl worked
      with paper and clay, that much was true. She smiled so lightly that
      it almost didn’t look like a smile at all: resembling the Mona Lisa.

      At another time, when she would have been annoyingly chipper and
      Happy, Danny would have squealed at Jack’s kindness. She saw him
      as the type of guy that could be a compassionate gentleman like
      those suave leading men in movies, but never gestured as such. Yet
      to see him help her like that…


      It was refreshing.

      The water, that is.


      The chair was comfy. Wing chairs often were, and the girl looked up
      at the fall figure that pressed his eyes onto her. She almost shrunk
      down at his gaze. Had she gone a little overboard? Oh, the shame,
      she thought and gulped the rest of the glass down. At least she wasn’t
      drunk. God knows how she acted when she was drunk.

      Danielle looked around without a word. Books lined these ornate shelves;
      this place seemed more like a ballroom than a library from how massive
      it was. Oh, a ballroom: her imagination began to wander. She thought of
      all the dancers in her head, step one, two, three four. Grace. Elegance.
      the same stride as Jack here, yet she didn’t realize that he had such…
      movement. Ballroom dancing… the movie played in her mind… she
      could have written a story with a character that, much like her, had no
      grace or poise; a huge lack of balance. She’d never been the greatest,
      but hell, she tried hard. The character would have one chance…. and
      blow it. Oh, irony! Who knew if that would be the ending? Who
      knew if Danny would even remember this idea? She didn’t have her
      pen and paper: she left them upstairs when she-

      The girl shook her head violently, the last of her missing composure finally
      streaming back into its proper place. How in the WORLD did she get from
      cheerful to shocked to freaking out to thoughtful and right back to cheerful
      again? What was wrong with her?

      Oh, yes.
      The chandelier.

      "Mr. Carpenter," she whined. "I’m very sorry."

      In that very same moment she tried to remember: how long had she known
      him? She’d been up here on many occasions with her mother, who only
      came up here to see her friends: the victim, in general. Danny had always
      been the third wheel: the daughter that was only here because mommy was.
      “Go do whatever you want, just don’t break anything.” Maybe that
      was why she couldn’t pinpoint a number; it had been that long. She’d explored
      the house, and when her mother recapped on the happenings between herself,
      Mr. Carpenter, and Mrs. Depares, the woman made them out to be pure assholes.
      A bigger smile touched Danielle’s lips. Constant bickering from that old hag,
      and the others just sat there, smiling, smiling of all things! Calm, even!

      She could never do that. She’d snap back at that old woman ten times bitchier than
      even she could muster! Her cheeks puffed at the thought, red.

      "Thank you for your help," she looked up at Jack with an apologetic grin. Danny
      set the glass between her knees for reassurance. She didn’t want that to break, too.
      Others soon came into the room. She noted a plump woman strung with pearls,
      a dashing gentleman trailing behind her, and many people around her own age:
      they looked as snobby and pompous as Mrs. Depares herself did. God rest her
      soul, thought Danielle. The room didn’t fill, though. Most people probably just
      went to bed. Did others leave? No, she thought, Willard probably wouldn’t have
      allowed it. She slunk into the wing chair, then, and asked:

      "Won’t you have a drink, too?"


      *


      Willard has dismissed the crowd with greater ease than he anticipated. Either the
      shock value had been high or Mrs. Depares had trained these heathens like lapdogs.
      The butler unhooked the giant ring form his black belt. The things was, this golden
      ring bigger than his hands only held four tiny keys.

      Click.

      The front door was now locked.

      Later, another click was heard. The Garage Door was now locked.

      Once more: click. And finally, the back doors and dining hall doors were sealed.

      Willard clasped the Skeleton key with sweaty palms. No one could get in without
      his approval, and he certainly would not let anyone out. The Butler remained in the
      front foyer of the Mansion with a phone nearby. Only when the police arrived would
      that door be opened.

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